Comments on: On the wings of death http://sheylara.com/2006/11/02/on-the-wings-of-death/ The sometimes damsel in distress Fri, 05 Sep 2008 09:05:20 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5 By: MikeM http://sheylara.com/2006/11/02/on-the-wings-of-death/#comment-47907 MikeM Wed, 20 Feb 2008 20:49:53 +0000 http://sheylara.com/2006/11/02/on-the-wings-of-death/#comment-47907 Wow.....See writing has all of the answers Wow…..See writing has all of the answers

]]> By: Hey I can write poems! http://sheylara.com/2006/11/02/on-the-wings-of-death/#comment-7099 Hey I can write poems! Fri, 10 Nov 2006 13:32:32 +0000 http://sheylara.com/2006/11/02/on-the-wings-of-death/#comment-7099 Here's my go at writing poems. I'm an amateur and no where as good as you guys but thought I'd share it anyway. "In the corner he sat that night Waiting for someone to shed some light Had he not been a moment too late He would have caught up with his mate Now barely sober he lies, a pile of mess. At the train station, not much of a "damsel in distress". Still the regrets and anguish abound Will she ever be back this time around? All the words and all the effort Away they went, just like Little Miss Muffet. Where did they go wrong? Why did this taxi take so long? Clutching his head in his hands, cockroaches scurried about his pants. It took was a moment of impulse that fateful day. No one just wanted to give way! Had he not lashed out at his spouse with that baseball bat, Surely she wouldn't have left the house with her favourite hat. Deep down he must have known he was wrong, deep down he could hear now an endless sad song. So near yet so far... Damn! Why... that lousy car..." Here’s my go at writing poems.
I’m an amateur and no where as good as you guys but thought I’d share it anyway.

“In the corner he sat that night
Waiting for someone to shed some light

Had he not been a moment too late
He would have caught up with his mate

Now barely sober he lies, a pile of mess.
At the train station, not much of a “damsel in distress”.

Still the regrets and anguish abound
Will she ever be back this time around?

All the words and all the effort
Away they went, just like Little Miss Muffet.

Where did they go wrong?
Why did this taxi take so long?

Clutching his head in his hands,
cockroaches scurried about his pants.

It took was a moment of impulse that fateful day.
No one just wanted to give way!

Had he not lashed out at his spouse with that baseball bat,
Surely she wouldn’t have left the house with her favourite hat.

Deep down he must have known he was wrong,
deep down he could hear now an endless sad song.

So near yet so far…
Damn! Why… that lousy car…”

]]> By: fraggleroc http://sheylara.com/2006/11/02/on-the-wings-of-death/#comment-6671 fraggleroc Mon, 06 Nov 2006 02:58:15 +0000 http://sheylara.com/2006/11/02/on-the-wings-of-death/#comment-6671 /sent chills down me spine. think it worked. but cheer up yeah. /sent chills down me spine. think it worked. but cheer up yeah.

]]> By: Monster http://sheylara.com/2006/11/02/on-the-wings-of-death/#comment-6497 Monster Sun, 05 Nov 2006 12:15:03 +0000 http://sheylara.com/2006/11/02/on-the-wings-of-death/#comment-6497 Cousie, It's a great poem...very good, lots of rhyming words. Got me thinking about life....and won't everyone be happier dead? But then again, that's not what life is meant to be. You know what I mean, right? Cousie,

It’s a great poem…very good, lots of rhyming words. Got me thinking about life….and won’t everyone be happier dead? But then again, that’s not what life is meant to be. You know what I mean, right?

]]> By: Mother http://sheylara.com/2006/11/02/on-the-wings-of-death/#comment-6483 Mother Sun, 05 Nov 2006 07:19:35 +0000 http://sheylara.com/2006/11/02/on-the-wings-of-death/#comment-6483 Like! Very the realism...that's why everybody asked about it mah :P Like! Very the realism…that’s why everybody asked about it mah :P

]]> By: Qiaoyun http://sheylara.com/2006/11/02/on-the-wings-of-death/#comment-6464 Qiaoyun Sat, 04 Nov 2006 20:37:07 +0000 http://sheylara.com/2006/11/02/on-the-wings-of-death/#comment-6464 Thank you all for your concern. It's very sweet. I'll be fine. Eventually. No need to worry. =) But... NOBODY LIKE MY POEM MEH?? =P Thank you all for your concern. It’s very sweet.

I’ll be fine. Eventually. No need to worry. =)

But…

NOBODY LIKE MY POEM MEH?? =P

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